As the title implies this little article is intended for guys who wish to write lesbian themed sex scenes that appeal to women. While I claim no more expertise at it than other writers, I have been asked by a few people to look at their submissions in the category and one of these prevailed upon me to write this little piece. Thanks Rumple. nnThe first thing that strikes me when I read most submissions by male authors in the category or as a scene in a different category is the lack of emotive response the scene produces. nnThe next thing I notice is a hurried feel to the work, as if the author is in a race to get to some goal. nnThe final major thing is a lack of preparation. nnSo here are a few suggestions for guys who wish to include lesbian scenes in their works, but feel daunted by the prospect. Keep in mind, the suggestions here are based around broad generalizations. If you wish to include a lesbian scene in a work where it isn't the central theme, such as a BDSM or N/C story, then your overall theme may very well supercede the suggestions.nnLACK OF EMOTIVE RESPONSE: Women do read erotica for the simple expedient of getting off, but tend to look for something a little deeper. There is an emotional component to the sex act for women, which seems to be much stronger than most men experience. If you wish to write a good lesbian scene you need to tap into that emotion. Does this mean you need to write a novel or give a complete psychoanalysis of each character to get the response you want? No. What it does mean is you need more than "I loved licking her pussy" in the way of emotion. nnWhat is your protagonist feeling emotionally? Why? What is it about this particular woman that makes her attractive and desirable above others? You don't have to delve into romance novels or use flowery language, but you do need to convey a depth of feeling from your characters that goes beyond simple physical attraction. They don't necessarily have to be in love.

PrefacennAs we learned in "Susan's Teen Lust Satisfied," Susan Smith is a wealthy 28-year-old lesbian whose greatest thrill in life is to seduce teen girls, introducing them to the joys of girl-girl sex.nnSusan's lesbian career began in high school, but she really came of age as a connoisseur of Sapphic sex while in college. That process started with her seduction at the hands – and lips - of the dyke-ish Laura. This led to an emotionally uplifting (and sexually satisfying) experience with the darling 18-year-old Kelly, and to one of the most erotic nights of Susan's life: An incredible lesbian orgy involving six beautiful, lusty young college girls. nn*nnSusan is taken by an "Amazon"nnWhen Susan was in college she tried to avoid those huge undergrad classes where a full blown professor lectures to several hundred students, but the only two-way contact students have with an instructor is in "discussion sections" led by a graduate student "teaching assistant." She found the lectures to be quite excellent, but dealing with overworked and underpaid grad students in the discussion sections was fraught with hazards. These individuals often took out their frustrations on undergrads, and the quality of their instruction was spotty at best. nnHowever, it was not possible or even desirable to avoid all such classes, and in the first semester of Susan's sophomore year, when she was still just 19-years-old, she found herself in such an environment after signing up for Anthropology 101. Her discussion section was led by a 25-year-old grad student who was the first "bull dyke" type lesbian Susan had ever met. Not to overstate the woman's persona – she didn't wear motorcycle leathers or men's clothing or anything like that, but she did have a crewcut, wore no makeup and made no secret of her sexuality. nnTrue to Susan's past experience, this woman, whose name was Laura, did not have much patience for the undergrads in her section, and even tended to bully those who didn't toe the line, meaning that they did not passively go along with whatever interpretation of the week's readings Laura was promoting. Naturally, this always meant viewing the material through the lens of the "cult of race, class and gender" that was absolute dogma with 97 percent of the liberal arts faculty at the prestigious state university. Even though she was already a confirmed lesbian herself, Susan found this unidimensional view of the world banal and absurd.nnIn addition to her tedious orthodoxy, Susan's "instructor" was physically intimidating. She was big – over six feet tall, but had a womanly body that was nicely proportioned: large hips, big shoulders, strong legs. In a word, statuesque. Laura was good looking, too, with a pretty face that her crewcut and lack of makeup could not hide. Naturally, even though Laura was about 180 degrees opposite of the type of woman that she usually found herself attracted to, Susan could not help but to wonder what sex would be like with such an amazon. nnSusan kept a low profile in the class, performing well on tests and papers (as usual), making the minimum number of participatory comments in discussions, and ones that were always perceptive and on-point. She figured that her mostly-idle curiosity about sex with Laura would go unsatisfied, because it was not deep enough to motivate her to follow up by seeking any more extensive engagement with the woman beyond that necessary for class.

Here's part three of the story. Thanks for the feedback so far, I'm doing my best to keep it from being the same old 'suck and fuck story' as someone put it so nicely. Hope you enjoy the next instalment. All comments appreciated.nn---------------------------------------------nnJake had brought something else down with him to add to the evening's entertainment, and now he moved behind Jenny to slide a blue cotton scarf over her eyes.nn"Oi" she cried again, "at least let me wipe my face first."nnJake consented and Jenny took the opportunity to clean the streak of cum from her face, scrubbing at it hard. Next she wiped at the cum across her tits and stomach, mopping as much up as she could on the soft material, in an attempt to restore a little dignity.nnIt didn't work.nnNaked but for a cum-stained scarf tied across her eyes, Jenny lay stretched out on the floor. Jake looked over at me and winked – what a sight she was.nnIt was my turn with the camera and I wasted no time shooting some more footage of her delicious body. I started with her blindfolded face and then panned down across her pert tits. I could tell she was feeling self conscious and vulnerable and she shifted a little uncomfortably.nnAs her hips moved the camera got a glimpse of her moist cleft and I moved in for a closer shot. She lay there unaware of the intruding presence of the camera as I moved the lens towards her thighs and in for an extreme close-up of her pussy. Jake slid his hand up her thigh and spread her cunt lips apart to give an even more explicit view, and Jenny gasped softly at his delicate touch.nnAs her wet cunt filled the viewfinder Jake slipped a single finger between her slick pussy lips and inserted it in her up to the knuckle. She shivered as he slid out again, his finger wet with her juices.nnAs he repeated the procedure Jake spoke quietly to her.

Afternoon by the Pool (III)nnI managed to turn in a pretty good round of golf and won a few bucks in the process. Plus, I had a great time being with Marcus. All in all it was a great afternoon, but I couldn't wait to get back to the house to see what Brandi and Sonia had been up to. Although it was already mid afternoon the sun was still very warm. When I got home I looked out the solarium windows and saw Sonia and Brandi lying on one of the double sized loungers that surrounded the pool. nnThe lounger was flat and Sonia was lying on her back. Her huge tits hung down to each side of her trim tanned body. Brandi was lying on her side turned toward Sonia with her hand resting just above Sonia's pussy. Both of them were totally naked and they looked yummy. nnI walked onto the upper deck and yelled down to get their attention. They both looked up and waved for me to come down and join them. I checked the time and saw there was plenty of time before our dinner guests would arrive so I grabbed a beer from the cooler and meandered down to the pool. nnWhen I reached the foot of the lounger I stopped and stood looking down at them. Right away I noticed a small change had taken place since I'd been gone. The little tuft of hair over Brandi's pussy was now gone. Her pussy was completely bare and smooth. Sonia loves the hairless look and I figured it wouldn't take long before Sonia shaved Brandi. Sonia has shaved me for years and takes a lot of enjoyment out of the activity.nnI smiled at them and said "So, what have you beautiful ladies been up to while I was gone?" I had a good idea because both of their pussies were red and swollen and their nipples had that sucked on look.