I'm always happy to receive CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Be kind, this is my first story.nn******nnLights flashing, the smell of cigarette smoke, perfume and alcohol permeate the dance floor. The music is loud and the crowd is lively. Holly doesn't go out to night clubs very often, especially considering that she wasn't 21 yet, but when she does the 20 year old likes to let her hair down and have fun. The young college student loved being able to dress sexy and show off her fit tanned body. Tonight was no different. nnHolly knew how to dress to make every inch of her curvaceous 5'3" 108 lb frame look amazing. Her hair was shoulder length, brown with blond highlights. The young girl wore a dark brown tank top with spaghetti straps that barely covered her belly button ring, accentuating her toned stomach and full 34C breasts. She also wore a pair of skin tight black hip hugger Lycra pants that allowed people to appreciate the lovely tribal tattoo on her lower back. Beneath the tattoo, and above her hip huggers, was a strategically positioned pair of black thong panties to help accentuate the young woman's lovely hips and butt. nnThe 20 year old was drawing the attention of sorts of onlookers. One of which was Alex, a 51 year old butch lesbian sitting at the bar, drinking a beer and admiring the lovely young woman on the dance floor. Normally Alex wouldn't have come to a bar like this, it wasn't her scene. This was a straight club which catered mainly to the college crowd. The 51 year old preferred going to a lesbian club across town, but tonight was different. Alex was just dumped by her longtime girlfriend. She wanted to get drunk and this club was just a block away from her apartment.nnAlthough the mature lesbian was devastated having just been dumped, she had to admit that the brunette on the dance floor was certainly easy on the eyes.