As the title implies this little article is intended for guys who wish to write lesbian themed sex scenes that appeal to women. While I claim no more expertise at it than other writers, I have been asked by a few people to look at their submissions in the category and one of these prevailed upon me to write this little piece. Thanks Rumple. nnThe first thing that strikes me when I read most submissions by male authors in the category or as a scene in a different category is the lack of emotive response the scene produces. nnThe next thing I notice is a hurried feel to the work, as if the author is in a race to get to some goal. nnThe final major thing is a lack of preparation. nnSo here are a few suggestions for guys who wish to include lesbian scenes in their works, but feel daunted by the prospect. Keep in mind, the suggestions here are based around broad generalizations. If you wish to include a lesbian scene in a work where it isn't the central theme, such as a BDSM or N/C story, then your overall theme may very well supercede the suggestions.nnLACK OF EMOTIVE RESPONSE: Women do read erotica for the simple expedient of getting off, but tend to look for something a little deeper. There is an emotional component to the sex act for women, which seems to be much stronger than most men experience. If you wish to write a good lesbian scene you need to tap into that emotion. Does this mean you need to write a novel or give a complete psychoanalysis of each character to get the response you want? No. What it does mean is you need more than "I loved licking her pussy" in the way of emotion. nnWhat is your protagonist feeling emotionally? Why? What is it about this particular woman that makes her attractive and desirable above others? You don't have to delve into romance novels or use flowery language, but you do need to convey a depth of feeling from your characters that goes beyond simple physical attraction. They don't necessarily have to be in love.

Preface: The sex in this story begins on page three, in the section titled, "Mom's seduction," and the mother-daughter incest begins on page six, in the section titled, "The most forbidden fruit." Between these scenes is one called, "I'm going to fuck your daughter now ."nnThe first two-and-one-half pages are a fantasy of a different sort and contain no sex. When her petite and darling young lover Kara reveals that she lusts for her virtuous, struggling single mom, model-perfect 28-year-old Susan Smith, lesbian epicure extraordinaire, suspects that the girl is being manipulated.nnUpon investigation she discovers that the voluptuous 36-year-old mom really is the paragon described by Kara, and is on the brink of financial disaster.nnExtremely-wealthy Susan provides a magnificent life-changing gift. She also invites mother and daughter to join her for a lengthy vacation on an idyllic private tropical island. This is the setting for the scenes named above.nnThe character Susan Smith was introduced in "Susan's Teen Lust Satisfied," also on this Web site. It is not necessary to read that story to appreciate this one.nnSusan loves and lusts for sweet young women, and her greatest thrill is to introduce them to the erotic pleasures of girl-girl sex. As an "angel investor" in a movie studio specializing in high quality lesbian erotica, Susan has ready access to willing candidates for her wanton passion. She satisfies this in carefully paced, sensuous seductions in her secluded mansion, where girls who have never known the touch of another woman but are seeking "adventure" are brought slowly to the point of begging for lesbian love.nn"Susan's Teen Lust Satisfied" describes one of these trysts. This story's Kara and Susan came together in another.nnPart 1 – The GiftnnChapter 1 – An urgent messagennSusan's pager beeped its distinct tone as she came out of a business meeting in Zurich, signaling that one of "her girls" had left a message on the hot line she set up in case they ever got in trouble, or needed help. Once back in the hotel she immediately made the call.nn"Hi Susan, this is Kara. I'm all right," the message on the machine back in California began. Smart Kara – to state that important fact first, so that Susan would not suffer unnecessary anxiety.

Very often I have been asked by my dear readers (thank you) for translations of my german stories (which are the much longer ones, as it is my native language). It´s a real pity that my english is not good enough to do that, and it would also be to time consuming (I prefer to write new stories, as this is much nicer…). Anyway thanks for your interest. As a little compensations for those dear readers I will try to write very short summaries of my german stories. I will just outline the plot and it´s characters very briefly and for all the sexy, erotic details I will rely on your fantasy to make yourself a whole, hot picture…nn1.„Die Sprachschülerin“nnIt´s an lesbian story about a young, eighteen year old, quite shy and sexually unexperienced exchange student in paris who meets Marie Claire Dupoir an elder lady of 58 years in a book store, where Andrea, the german teenage girl, is reading some erotic books. The French Lady has a very dominant (BBW) body, with big breasts and lot of curves and a very mature and dominant but ladylike charakter. After a first drink together the girl of 18 is invited for a dinner. In advance the French lady sends her some lingerie and a sexy dress to wear. The dinner ends up with some erotic, secret games in a restaurant like tasting each others pussy-juices from each others fingers as part of the desert and going for a erotic dance to a club. Andrea is getting very aroused by the games initiated by the dominating, mature lady and after the visit to the club they are heading home and the girl is seduced in a very ladylike, experienced way by the older big woman. Andrea loves the mature, big body, Marie Claires big breasts and big arse and is willingly learning lesbian sex games from her much elder BBW-lover. nn2.„Zwei Frauen und zwei Mädchen auf Urlaub“ nnThis story is about two mature ladies (Claudia, 53 and Lisa 52) who meet two teenage girls (Tina and Sabrina; both 18) on a holiday trip. They spend an evening, dining out and going to a dance-bar together and a very erotic atmosphere is arising. In the bar Lisa and Sabrina go to the toilet together and Sabrina is seduced by the older Lisa for a first shy and very soft try of watersports – games and a first exchange of French kisses. On the next day the four have a shopping trip together and finally the two teenagers are invited to stay in their hotel rooms. Sabrina goes with Lisa and Tina with Claudia. Lisa is seducing Sabrina very fast not only to very hot lesbian sex games but also to some kinky watersports games in the bathroom. Meanwhile in the other room Tina is aroused by the mature body of Claudia and slowly seduces her to tender but passionate lesbian sex.

"I'll see you in a few days hon. Have you seen the news? No. Been busy, have you? Okay Tally, try not to miss me so much."nn"Oh Daddy, I really miss you, but I'm trying not to be too bored without you." The alluring brunette blew a kiss to Carly who was perched on the bed, waiting for her to come back. They'd barely gotten out of bed in the past few days, other than to eat, shower [ and fuck in the shower ] and then fuck again.nnGeorge had called yesterday and he and Carly had words - loud words. Natalia's sister-in-law told him she was staying away for a while "to think". Tally began kissing down the blonde's sexy body as she hung up the phone. "You won't be thinking too much for a while, babe!" she teased as she saw the blissful expression cross her face.nnNatalia sent her father a kiss and hung up. Steven then rejoined Silvia on the bed and she began sucking him to hardness. Since their first fuck, after every personal appearance, the young blonde had rushed back to whatever hotel they were booked in, gotten naked and insisted he fuck her as much as she wanted. Only his daughter-lover matched Silvia Anders for sexual ferocity.nnNatalia, cuddled with Carly in the oversize bed, knew her father's next appearance with Silvia Anders was in Chicago, he'd be gone for at least 3 more days, likely longer. Perfect. By then, she'd have all her plans in motion.